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The Unwanted Writings

The DP tags your poetry "inappropriate". So what are you gonna do? You can't just let your words go unsaid! So, you put it down here, at The Unwanted Writings. This is where Edgar Allen Poe, Walt Whitman, and many other famous poets would have gone, their poetry deemed "inappropriate". Maybe you're just tired of having to resubmit your poetry so many times, because it seems that no matter how much you study it and look over it, it never goes with the Holy Format.
Whatever your reason, I hope you have found the place to put your poetry where others may enjoy it.

Rules:
(Yes, there a some rules)

1. This not the place to put hate poetry, or poetry that is way too sexualy explicit.

2. Please try not to put in poetry that has a large amount of expletives. A few are alright, just not three or four every line.

3. Put the title at the beginning and the author at the end, and try to use as the best grammar you can. Go by what others have, but other than that, there's no format.

4. Also, make sure to put your poem at the end of the page. Thanks!

Ok, I've decided to put some "polishers" up here. Polisher is a person who fixes the lower case, emboldens things, adds (') those, etc. Polishers have to be on alot, and the reasons I have their names up here is so that if they accidentally mess your poem up, you can talk to them about it and get it fixed. I'm not in need of any polishers, but who knows when I will be? Here they are, anyway:

Polishers
[Your Favorite Stranger]
[hh]
If your poem has been messed up, just give one of us a yell!

That said, write away!

Woo i'm soo honoured to be the first person on here!

My Family Portrait

Daddy brought a gun home today
He said he wouldn't use it.
He said that mommy broke his heart
He said she abused it.
And daddy said his life is over.

Daddy and mommy gave me Ella.
Last night daddy told us we were going to take a bath
But daddy just stood there touching us.
Ella cried but daddy laughed.

Daddy took Ella to the living room.
He told her to lie down.
Daddy unzipped his pants,
Ella started to frown.
Ella screamed.

I ran to Daddy's study
And rumaged through his stuff.
I worried about what he'd say,
He hasn't hit me enough.
Daddy never smiles anymore though.

I found the gun in daddy's drawer.
It was dark and shiny and big,
But i heard Ella screaming my name so I ran.
Daddy's gun was dangerous
But it would fix everything.

Suddenly I heard Daddy shouting naughty words
That he used to call my mommy.
I ran into the room but Ella was naked.
She started crying and ran to me
But daddy had a knife.

But daddy walked towards El
Holding it in his hand.
And Ella ran towards me
But daddy still screamed his demand.
He told her to lie down but she kept going.

I didnt like the way daddy was acting.
He wasn't normally like this.
He loved me, El and mommy so much
I wanted to shoot but I'd miss.
So i took El to the kitchen.

I sat her on the worktop
And told her not to worry.
"Soon Daddy will be gone
But he's really really sorry
That he hurt you El."

I went back to Daddy.
I saw him sitting and crying.
He saw the gun I was holding
And he said he was sorry
But I knew he was lying.

I went up to Daddy and stood up tall
And so,
I whispered the words "I'm sorry Daddy
You have to go."
And Daddy fell to the ground.

[ninja.kicks.ass]

Dirty Girl

Dirty girl, on the street.
To make her trip you stick out your feet.
There she goes, watch her fall,
Run away as she cracks her skull.
Naive strangers, telling me
They let her go, in death's she free.
Telling lies to pass the time,
Letting smack tell them it's fine.
Chain reaction, here we go.
The cops are coming; quick, let's go.
Every man for their own lives,
Everyone's living a lie.
Smokers watching me,
They only pretend to be free.
I hold the truth, I've got the light.
No one's all right in nobody's sight.
Dirty girl was on the street
The smokers were watching me.
To make her trip, I stuck out my feet.
I let her go, in death she's free.

[nokaredes]

Pain

You start getting tired,
struggling for breath,
The pain creeps up,
and worsens the stress.

Life deteriorates
before your eyes.
The pain creeps up,
for all your lies.

The destruction starts,
to take its toll.
The pain creeps up,
and eats your soul.

You find a gun,
pointed at your head.
The pain creeps up,
and leaves you dead.

Written by [tenshi-ryuu]

Who

What do you see, eyes, what do you see?
Are you thinking when you are looking at me-
A chubby girl, panties all in a bunch,
The quiet kid who sits with outcasts at lunch,
Who’s the girl with whom you’d rather be friends,
When you know because of you her faith in god will soon end,
Who seems to look over the signals you send,
And forever is nothing more than a friend,
Who now has cancer because of the choices you made,
Whose glances you dodge until her face fades.
Is that what you’re thinking? Is that what you see?
Then open your eyes world,
YOU’RE NOT LOOKING AT ME!

I’ll tell you who I am, as I walk my slow pace,
As I am surrounded by people who don’t see my face:
I’m a person with feelings that are yet to be felt,
Because it seems no romantic cards have been dealt;
A twinkle of hope is still in here somewhere,
A sought after light that I treat with great care;
A time son will come when that light will go out,
A time in the near future, I hold no doubt;
At my place, now I have the bottom rung to myself,
It’s a position I relish, but it’s my own little shelf,
A veteran at irony, a master of desire,
I hope that my twinkle will one day be fire.

written by [angrybuddhas.]

That Instant

As I wait to cross the street
I see the “walk” sign blink.

Although I've heard of drunk-driver deaths
I still don't stop to think.

I take some steps into the street
And hear a sudden screech.

Next thing I know I'm stuck to steel
Like some blood-sucking leech.

In that instant I didn't stop to think
About the horrid consequences of taking just one drink.

Then my life flashed before my eyes
In just one sudden thought.

All the moments good and bad
That every day had brought.

I hear paramedics saying
Prayers under their breath.

But that Instant of carelessness
Brought me to my death.

Written by [Moving on in Life]

I Did

Went to a party
heres what they said
have a drink
just one drink
so i did

started dancing
drinking hard
someone passed me a pill
told me to take it
so i did

loopied up
having fun
saw the bowl
they said hit it once
so i did

a few more hits
a ton more drinks
i saw the line
they said snort it
so i did

trippin hard
seeing stars
saw the boy
he said come to my car
so i did

sweaty bodies
empty minds
the condom tore
he said dont care
so i didn't

nine months later
can't see my feet
swelled so big
im paying the price
for what i did

took the gun
wrote the note
but it to my head
blew the hole
now im dead

Written by [evil penguin]

The other side

A bully once came up to me
Came up to me and said

"Give me all your lunch money,
Or I'll lodge my fist inside your head"

In shock and awe and horrendous fear
I forked over all my cash

I couldn't help but ask myself
"why was he so harsh?"

Now I stand, just right here
Down an empty hall

With someone's colloar in my fist,
And his back against the wall

One side tells me to beat him up
Because that's half the fun

But the other side screams
"drop him! Just drop the kid and run!"

SO quickly I make a simple choice,
As I lower him to the ground

I let him go and watch him run
Because a new path I have found

Written by [Moving on in Life]

Untitled

Wherefore art thou, oh my love?
No one knows.
Except to say thou aren't at home.
I gasp then run;
'Tis as I feared;
Thou hadst spoken of thy death as it neared.
I run; I stumble, I trip and fall,
But knowing i must get to thee above all
Driveth me onward, maketh me take
Desperate measures to follow in thy wake.
I know where to find thee,
Thou explained it quite clear,
How to get from here to there.
And so I ran, with heart beating,
Legs flying, I ran to the place i knew thou i would'st find.
And find thee I did: thy silent deed was done:
Thou layest quite cold in a puddle of blood.
I threw myself down, pulled thee into my arms,
Crying and sobbing and kissing thee hard.
But nothing happened, twas all for naught:
Thy beautiful soul, Death's minions had caught.
I looked down at mine body, covered with thy own life,
Inspired by thought, I searched for the knife
That had stabbed my love's heart.
I clutched it, then whispered, "I come where thou art."
So saying, I plunged the knife deep.
A moment of pain, then I fell in a heap.
The last moments of my life, my end of the race,
But it was soon over and I was greeted by thy face.

Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]

Broken Mirror

I look into my mirror
And she stares back at me.
Long we glare at one another;
No end is close to see.

Who's eyes within this face are set?
Who's hair of golden hue?
Who's tears are these that stream
From eyes of darkest blue?

Who's face is this, so very sad?
Who's eyes with shadows wrought?
Who's brows now crease together
With every weary thought?

I smile at this stranger,
Conjured from out my mind.
To my surprise, she smiles back;
At least she has the time.

I laugh aloud, and so does she,
'Tis like we're both the same,
Soon I find myself wondering
'Does she maybe have a name?'

We start off simply looking,
And then we get to talking,
Soon, we do it everyday;
I before the mirror stalking.

I stare into the mirror;
But not her face I see:
Instead, there is a demon there,
Reaching out for me.

I try to run away,
But the demon from the mirror
Follows, grabbing for me,
Its hands are getting nearer.

I get a close up view of it,
And to my horror find
The face it wears upon its head
Is nothing less than mine!

Terrified beyond all words,
I look, and pray to find
Something with which to break
The mirror, left behind.

A book, it is my saviour!
I throw it at the glass,
The demon- now it shatters,
Upon the lively-hood of my past.

I fall with it to the floor,
I share this demon's pain.
Horrified, I realize
All my efforts were in vain:

The mirror held the image
Of what I had become.-
My mind now oh so broken-
My body begins to numb.

I stare blindly at the mirror,
Now shattered on the floor,
Millions of tiny images
Of what is never more.

Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]

Peace

I stare into the mirror
Eyes of deep brown look back
Shadows pain in blood all behinde them
Like glass holding in an ocean
Of crimsion red and blue
No one knows what I've seen no not even you
I've told all my secrets and then a little more
But still you dont know what lies behinde the door
The door that leads into me
Like a rotten apple core
Slowly ripping apart my insides
Making me all torn
Cries and sobs escape me
In the darkest night
I think that I'm Alright
But we all know im not
Im destrought with thoughts of death
Losing my last breath
Horror pain and murder are in my little world
Twist and turning mixing together in a whirl
No one knows whats happening in my little mind
No one trys to find out by being oh so kind
As to cut open my head
Lay upon my corpse
Kill me on the bed
See the crimson blood ive shed
And whisper sweet words into my ear
Kiss away the tears from blank eyes staring
No one even caring
That as you pleasure your self
I'm already dead
On the inside no one sees
That im not who you think
I'm gone from this world
My body begans to stink
Try to wash me clean in your perfect porcelain sink
But my Hands wont wash clean of this blood
That you lowered on me
From a knife so keen to your senses
No one even saw
The terror in my eyes
But its ok
Because soon youll be found
And my body rest in peace

Written by [Ego Diligo Tu]

Imagine

Every morning I am thanking my stars
Feel so lucky having you in my arms
Wouldn't be the same without you,babe
There's not a thing about you I would change
I'm incomplete when you're far away
And when you're here,you make me whole again
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I foud someone who will make me say this and mean it.

Couldn't imagine life without you,
I want to wrap my arms around you
You're like a miracle in the month of March
I just want to kiss your face.

Sometimes I have to stop and stare
Might even run my fingers through your hair
Just to see that this is not a dream
I've got to see you smiling back at me
And I'm okay as long as you're okay
Don't have to ask, I know you feel the same
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I found someone who could make me say this and mean it.

Written by [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]

Tribute to our Armed Forces

From Pearl Harbor
To Iraq

On us they
Haven't turned their back.

Fighting all night
And fighting all day

Struggling under fire
To keep hostiles at bay.

Fighting for freedom
to uphold all our rights.

Yet when they come home
They hide from "The Lights".

They don't ask for fortune
And they don't ask for fame

Because while they're out there
They all share the same name.

So this is my tribute
For Honor's the call

For the men and women
Who ask for nothing at all.

©2005 Brandon Aaron Bessman

Written by [Moving on in Life]

Sorry everyone, but this page has ran out of room. Please add all future poetry to More Unwanted Writings. Thanks.

Alright people, here you have your banners link:TUW Banners. Also, to anyone who made a banner for TUW, please go and add your name under your banner.
Thanks,
[Your Favorite Stranger]

2005-04-28 [The 5 Elements]: im back again

2005-04-29 [evil penguin]: woo me 2

2005-04-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: hmmm, i din't know they came in blue...

2005-04-29 [evil penguin]: yep, they come in almost all colors

2005-04-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: huh...well, i learn....well, nothing really, but...oh dash it all!

2005-04-29 [evil penguin]: learnings bad for u. it hurts

2005-04-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yeah, that's true....*thinks* you think we should get a banner?

2005-04-29 [evil penguin]: yea. it should be somethin like a scroll with one of those red circle with the line through it things over it. that would be cool

2005-04-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: scroll...ok thankies

2005-04-29 [evil penguin]: lol, no problem. i need to stop thinking

2005-04-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: got one...it sucks and i

2005-04-29 [evil penguin]: well let me see it. if u want i can try 2 make 1.

2005-04-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: that would prbably be a better idea

2005-04-30 [evil penguin]: lol

2005-04-30 [Moving on in Life]: *attempts to make a pink post-it from his bag of assorted items.*

2005-04-30 [evil penguin]: *gives Lazerus a pink post-it from her personal stash on her forehead*

2005-04-30 [nokaredes]: you can't make a post-it!

2005-04-30 [evil penguin]: ooo, ill make 1, and ill make it good

2005-04-30 [evil penguin]: join my new wiki, huge boobs

2005-04-30 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol....nice banner katie!!! thanks for making it!

2005-04-30 [evil penguin]: no problem, i was bored anyway, lol

2005-05-02 [Your Favorite Stranger]: hmmhmm hope this thing isn't just gonna die out on...

2005-05-03 [tenshi-ryuu]: just mention it every now and then on daily poem... enough people will come...

2005-05-03 [evil penguin]: or go around to all the wikis you belong to and stick a link on the comments thing. its so annoying that people actually check it out

2005-05-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Jamie! cna i make a diffrent banner and umm umm i wann put a poem up jamie please???????? i love you forever and ever! please you can pick the poem!!!*gets on knees by jamie*

2005-05-03 [ninja.kicks.ass]: wow! this is looking great. the poems on here are amazing (besides mine) rock on dudes n dudesses and keep posting. woo!

2005-05-03 [evil penguin]: oo more banners? mine sucks, u should make 1

2005-05-03 [Your Favorite Stranger]: liz: yes!!! we desperately need more banner sot choose from!!! send me any of you poems that you want to add and i'll check 'em!!! thanks

2005-05-04 [tenshi-ryuu]: how do ya like that one?

2005-05-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh my gosh!!!! so perdy!!!! i dunno which one to use....

2005-05-04 [tenshi-ryuu]: I like making banners and stuff... I'm just glad this one turned out good...

2005-05-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: it sure did! thanks!

2005-05-04 [tenshi-ryuu]: anytime ^_^

2005-05-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins* goody!! *cough* sorry kinda hyper tonight

2005-05-04 [tenshi-ryuu]: its s'ok...

2005-05-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh good! i feel better

2005-05-04 [tenshi-ryuu]: ya... I used my own poem in the banner so as not to create any problems...

2005-05-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: it's great...i'm gonna put it in my house

2005-05-04 [evil penguin]: awesome banner tenshi!

2005-05-04 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *twitches* must work on banner and poems*begans to take perscription more then supposed to* must feel better!

2005-05-05 [tenshi-ryuu]: Danke! ^_^

2005-05-05 [evil penguin]: hmm *thinks to self*. nope, ive got nothing to write about

2005-05-05 [Wes Foxx]: all these poems seem to involve guns at peoples heads and/or drug-related death. dead, squished, suicided, run over, split her head open, dead dead dead.

2005-05-05 [evil penguin]: well most poems deemed "unappropriate" by others do contain unpleasent things, and nobody likes to think about death. most people would rather read poems about happy little bunnies

2005-05-05 [Wes Foxx]: ugh, no. Id rather read poems that make you think about life. not happy sunshine, gloomy shadows, or death. I want creativity and life. inspiration.

2005-05-05 [evil penguin]: then write one and post it, it would be a welcomed change. ur right, all of these poems involve death in some way

2005-05-05 [Wes Foxx]: If you notice my house, I have =P 6 times. what may become the seventh poem already meets the DPF.

2005-05-05 [evil penguin]: dpf? sorry, im a bit stupid tonight

2005-05-05 [Wes Foxx]: daily poem format.

2005-05-05 [evil penguin]: ahhh, ok. well that puts us in a bit of a pickle

2005-05-05 [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]: I did have my poem here. But it looks like someone took it down :( O' Well.

2005-05-06 [Your Favorite Stranger]: if you'd repost it, i'd like to see it. to whoever took off the poem (if it was anyone on here): please don't remove any work from the page

2005-05-06 [evil penguin]: i think we might have to make a second page, it says this one is getting too big. maybe one of the guards took it down

2005-05-06 [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]: I dont understand why they would, since I was told to go here... *frowns* but I will post it again. :-)

2005-05-06 [evil penguin]: yay

2005-05-06 [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]: I hope I did it right... let me know.

2005-05-06 [evil penguin]: yup, it showed up. good poem by the way.

2005-05-06 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yes very good! katie, i think you've got a good idea going there; wanna let a few more on here and then we'll make the second?

2005-05-06 [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]: Thanks! :-)

2005-05-06 [Your Favorite Stranger]: thank you for resubmitting it!!

2005-05-06 [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]: Your welcome! I put it on here two weeks ago and I came back and it wasent there anymore which made me upset! :-( Anyway... atleast it is there now and I HOPE IT STAYS THERE THIS TIME LOL.

2005-05-07 [evil penguin]: ya, lets say 2 more? then call the next 1 "more unwanted writings" or something like that

2005-05-07 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *walks in and pokes katie* hello how is everyone?

2005-05-07 [evil penguin]: *pokes love back* pretty good, how are you?

2005-05-07 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Good talking to my boyfriend and watching fused....Thanks for entering my contest and making a second page i really need more people to eneter..

2005-05-07 [tenshi-ryuu]: what kind of contest?

2005-05-07 [Ego Diligo Tu]: An Art contest for couples it is couples contest

2005-05-09 [evil penguin]: i entered that

2005-05-10 [Your Favorite Stranger]: nice banner liz...did any of you guys get cut off for a while?

2005-05-11 [The 5 Elements]: i did, what was with that

2005-05-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: they said that ET died...w/e that means

2005-05-11 [The 5 Elements]: i read on google that they where doing more back ups, but im not sure if thats new or not

2005-05-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: hmmm, might be

2005-05-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: thanks for the info anyway

2005-05-11 [The 5 Elements]: thats ok, so how r u

2005-05-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: not bad i must say

2005-05-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yourself?

2005-05-11 [The 5 Elements]: been better

2005-05-11 [evil penguin]: it said in the news on elfpack that the main computor crashed and they had to replace it, if that helps u guys any.

2005-05-12 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yup readed that, thanks!!

2005-05-12 [evil penguin]: no problem. and whats wrong blade?

2005-05-12 [The 5 Elements]: im over it now, me and mum had our biggest fight yet

2005-05-12 [evil penguin]: im sorry, i know how that goes. when my mom and i had our big blowout i was grounded to the basement for 3 months. it was baaad

2005-05-13 [The 5 Elements]: i wasnt grounded, basically complete indipendence, transportation i have to pay for myslf, food made by myself, etc

2005-05-13 [evil penguin]: oo, that almost sucks more. i have a hard enough time trying to pay my car insurence everymonth by myself, let alone all the other stuff

2005-05-14 [Moving on in Life]: I coulda swore I was watchin this page........

2005-05-14 [evil penguin]: y wut happened?

2005-05-14 [Moving on in Life]: I dunno....Maybe I just forgot to click..I do that alot

2005-05-14 [Moving on in Life]: I mean, I even got two poems on here!

2005-05-14 [Moving on in Life]: Which reminds me.....I DO need to put another up.........

2005-05-14 [evil penguin]: ooo poems. and i forget to click sometimes 2. like today at work i meant to put my phone on silent mode, but i ended up just changing the settings for silent mode and leaving it on regular

2005-05-14 [Moving on in Life]: I do that alot......My mind is always elsewhere...

2005-05-14 [evil penguin]: exactly, i just cant find where that is

2005-05-14 [Moving on in Life]: I think I'll toss in my newest poem.....

2005-05-14 [evil penguin]: ok, but after ur done tossing we should make a second page cus this ones getting too big

2005-05-14 [Moving on in Life]: Ok, It's in. How do we make a second page?

2005-05-14 [evil penguin]: nice poem. do u mind if i send it to a friend of mine? hes going to iraq in a month and i think hed like it

2005-05-14 [evil penguin]: ill take care of it. just everyone watch for a link to pop up and stop posting on this page

2005-05-14 [Moving on in Life]: Sure. Go for it....(sorry, but I say thius all the time to ANYONE...It's copyrighted..no offense)

2005-05-14 [evil penguin]: lol, no offense taken. i have no intention of stealing ur poem, thats rude

2005-05-14 [Moving on in Life]: I know...It's just something I do...I had one poems stolen from me, so it's precautionary to Copyright it, and inform them of such.

2005-05-14 [evil penguin]: well thats a smart thing to do then

2005-05-14 [Your Favorite Stranger]: awesome poem lazerus!!! and thnaks to whoever made the second page

2005-05-15 [Wes Foxx]: oh please. you could still add more to it if you wanted, the DP gets about 3 times this big at least before they're maxed out.

2005-05-15 [evil penguin]: ya, but its nice for those of us who still have modems so it doesnt take an hour 4 the page to load. and ur welcome

2005-05-15 [Moving on in Life]: Thank you...It justr came to me while watching "whose line is it anyway"

2005-05-15 [evil penguin]: i love that show!!!

2005-05-15 [Moving on in Life]: It's awesome...improv comedy at it's finest

2005-05-15 [evil penguin]: of course. but snl is by far the best comedy show, even if its not improv

2005-05-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol, kinda interesting that you got that watching a comedy

2005-05-16 [Moving on in Life]: Yeah, It kinda amazes me still...But then again, Ryan was imitating a line from "Full Metal Jacket", which, by the way, is an AWESOME movie...I've memorized most of his insults.

2005-05-16 [evil penguin]: really? ive never seen it. whats it about?

2005-05-17 [Moving on in Life]: It

2005-05-17 [Moving on in Life]: It's basically about The Vietnam War, but there is more focus on boot camp where one guy goes nuts, killin the drill sarge, and then himself.

2005-05-17 [evil penguin]: crazy. my favorite nam movie is Apocolypse Now, but only like the 1st half. it gets a little long in the end

2005-05-17 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks back and forth* i've never seen any of them so i find this educating...lol

2005-05-17 [Moving on in Life]: lol

2005-05-18 [evil penguin]: lol. have u ever heared the phrase "i love the smell of napalm in the morning?" its from that movie

2005-05-18 [The 5 Elements]: ive definatley heard that one

2005-05-18 [evil penguin]: everyone has

2005-05-18 [The 5 Elements]: they use it in alot of movies now

2005-05-18 [Moving on in Life]: My nephew knows that one, and he's 4

2005-05-18 [evil penguin]: lol, thats kinda funny

2005-05-18 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks around* i feel left out

2005-05-18 [Moving on in Life]: *hugs forgotten* Don't be. I'll include you

2005-05-19 [evil penguin]: wait, why are we hugging?

2005-05-19 [The 5 Elements]: she feels left out

2005-05-19 [Moving on in Life]: just cause. *hugs Katie_did*

2005-05-19 [evil penguin]: yay! i got hugged! *smiles*

2005-05-20 [Moving on in Life]: Giving out free hugs! you have 10 minytes! after that, it's $1 a hug!

2005-05-20 [evil penguin]: damn, i dont have a dollar

2005-05-20 [Moving on in Life]: I do! I actually got five!

2005-05-20 [evil penguin]: lucky. wait til tommarow, cus tomarrow is pay day

2005-05-20 [Moving on in Life]: Lucky you...I don't HAVE a job...

2005-05-20 [evil penguin]: lucky you, i dont WANT a job

2005-05-20 [Moving on in Life]: I'll trade ya

2005-05-20 [The 5 Elements]: *recieves a free hug* and i thought i was feeling left out

2005-05-20 [evil penguin]: hey, no freebies!

2005-05-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laughing her head off* i don't feel left out anymore...*gives blade a free hug* there. now that wasn't stealing was it?

2005-05-21 [Moving on in Life]: (To save time) *Gives everyone a free hug*

2005-05-21 [evil penguin]: ok, now we are all even, but im selfish *gives self hug*

2005-05-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol

2005-05-22 [Moving on in Life]: *gives self TWO hugs* HA! I win!

2005-05-22 [evil penguin]: damnit! damnit all!!!

2005-05-22 [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]: Just by wondering.. do these get judged?

2005-05-22 [Your Favorite Stranger]: judged? as in how?

2005-05-22 [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]: Like... in some sort of contest type thing.

2005-05-22 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *sighs* no...it'd be awesome but nope...

2005-05-22 [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]: Why not? I thought you could do that though?

2005-05-22 [Your Favorite Stranger]: i mean we could have a contest sure, but no one but us would know about it... it wouldn't be like the DP contests if that's what you meant

2005-05-22 [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]: Yeah, Kinda like that in a way. I just thought it would be pretty cool if we had one anyway.

2005-05-22 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yes it really would...more people would come here too...*sigh*

2005-05-22 [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]: Yeah. Most likely :) thats why I said something. I better go for now, send me another message and I will get back to it later on here. Bye!

2005-05-22 [Your Favorite Stranger]: ok! thanks for asking...it might lead somewhere someday...bye!

2005-05-23 [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]: Yeah.. that would be kool.

2005-05-23 [Moving on in Life]: nope. The writings will be judged on Daily Poem

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: what?

2005-05-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: how did they get judged on the DP???*looks confused*

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: that's what i was confuzzled about

2005-05-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *hides head* ahhhhhhh!

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *curls into a ball to keep from being confuzzled even more* grrr

2005-05-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pokes words and watches them bounce* yay

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *pokes the word poke and it falls apart: p ke* *watches the o fall somewhere deep*

2005-05-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *catches oh and replaces it in poke*hehe*pokes the word the and watches the t go to the left and the e to the right then back to the h*

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *giggles and pokes the word love* *the lo and the ve bounce together then rebound back apart* fun

2005-05-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: isnt it though

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: very *wide grin*

2005-05-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pokes the word very watching th v and y bounce back then squish the whole word together tighter*

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *watches that, then pokes the word whole and it goes spinning around in a circle*

2005-05-23 [evil penguin]: damnit all! u had a poking fight without me?! *pokes everyone*

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: hey! not a poking fight! we were poking words to see what they did

2005-05-23 [evil penguin]: ohh, i just saw a lot of pokes and assumed

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol i would too, so yeah

2005-05-23 [evil penguin]: well can i try?

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *shrugs* knock yourself out

2005-05-23 [evil penguin]: yay! *pokes the word yay and watches the ys bounce 20 feet in the air*

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *watches also* heh this is loads of fun

2005-05-23 [evil penguin]: well of course it is *catches ys and puts them in her pocket*

2005-05-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at the lonely a* aww it loooks so alone *puts the a in her hoodie pocket* there

2005-05-24 [Moving on in Life]: I missed somethin...Are all of you STONED or something?! Catching letters?!

2005-05-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *sighs over the stupidity* no, silly, we were poking letters. those just got poked and they went up. they do all kinds of different things you know.

2005-05-24 [evil penguin]: yea, you should try it some time *pokes time and listens to the chiming bells*

2005-05-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *pokes katie and listens to the birds singing* wow

2005-05-24 [evil penguin]: tee hee, i like birds *pokes bird and watches it fly away squaking*

2005-05-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: i figured that

2005-05-24 [evil penguin]: what? that i like birds or that the word squaks?

2005-05-24 [Moving on in Life]: *pokes Everyone to see what happens*

2005-05-24 [evil penguin]: *runs away screaming*

2005-05-24 [Moving on in Life]: I could get used to this *grins wide, and pokes Katie_did again*

2005-05-24 [evil penguin]: damn u! *runs away sceaming, then runs back and pokes terini*

2005-05-24 [Moving on in Life]: *pokes Katie continually, Grinning sadistically, but wincing with every poke he gets, and sometimes yelping*

2005-05-24 [evil penguin]: *grabs a baseball bat* STOP THE MADNESS! *swings bat at others, but hits herself in the face and knocks herself out*

2005-05-24 [Moving on in Life]: * kneels down and lightly smacks Katie's face to wake her up.*

2005-05-24 [evil penguin]: *cough cough* owwee

2005-05-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pokes katie and does alil giggle n runs away*

2005-05-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: i'm lost, so *pokes everyone THREE times then climbs a tall tree*

2005-05-24 [evil penguin]: *pokes the tree time is in and watches time fall*

2005-05-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: agh!! *falls into a pile of leaves* hah! *pokes the ground under katie and watches it open up* heh heh

2005-05-25 [evil penguin]: *falls to china and pokes a fortune cookie*

2005-05-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks down at you and the fortune cookey* hey! i love those things! &jumps into the hole after you*